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Not Pretty

by ~LokiSuku

I'm not a pretty thing,
I don't stand in a mirror.
I am not to gazed at,
with imperfect affection.

Your are not my savior,
you words cannot melt my heart
And I will keep walking
while you stand alone.

I'm not a little flower
who drifts in the wind
I'm guided by my anger
and my need for revenge

My hands are not for holding
but weilding weapons of war.
My lips are not flaxen
But barbs knitted by bees.
My eyes are nothign really
but holes from which I see.

I'm not a pretty thing.
With my razor in my hand.
I'm not a pretty thing.
I'm just what you don't understand.
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:iconscheissegeist:
i liek this so much i maed a song!
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:iconlokisuku:
Oh, wow, thank you...

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:iconscheissegeist:
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
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:icon5-7x28mm:
~5-7x28mm Sep 1, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
And that, my dear, is what I find 'pretty'. :)

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:iconscreamwhatyouare:
wow.

beautiful.

relation...

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:icongarnetrose:
Very angry but its great a wonderful poem!! :clap:

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:blackrose:I never said I was "nice" & i never claimed to be "normal":rose:
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:iconinlikenessofanangel:
"... barbs knitted by bees..."

I really like that. The hateful sting of a sharp tongue.

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"For you I'd bleed myself dry.....:
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